Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that eating fast

foods

in a restaurant has a variety of benefits

,

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since

people

prefer to eat their meals immediately without wasting any

time

. Contrary to

this

popular belief, there are still those who argue that it is a proper habit to eat meals at

home

. I am inclined to believe that eating

foods

at

home

is a wiser option for

people

.

First

and foremost, the quality of

foods

which are prepared

in

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home

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the home
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is very different from the

foods

which are served in

restaurants

. Up to a point, when somebody wants to cook at

home

, she has to buy fresh vegetables, meat and fruits with high quality for cooking the food.

On the contrary

, most of the

restaurants

do not pay attention to

this

point.

Moreover

, it is crystal clear that the

foods

people

cook at

home

are much healthier than the

restaurants

_

foods

,

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because most of the

foods

especially fast

foods

are cooked with a lot of oil and causes various diseases like obesity and cancer.

Additionally

,

home cooked

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foods

consist of nutrients

such

as vitamin C,

fiber

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and protein.

Another significant fact which should be taken into consideration is that eating

foods

at

home

can gather family

members

together in each

meal

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time

. In

technology

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century,

majority

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of

people

spend most of their

time

with laptops, cellphones and tablets,

instead

of spending

time

with friends or family

members

.

Hence

,

meal times

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are really important for gathering family

members

. since all the

members

spend a certain amount of

time

for

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eating in a day and it is a good choice to spend

this

time

with family

members

.

In contrast

, eating at

restaurants

does not create the chance to have

relationship

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with family

members

.

Finally

yet importantly, in today_s society money is a key factor for all

people

., so one way to save money is avoiding eating meals at

restaurants

. When

people

cook

foods

at

home

it can be cheaper for them.

For instance

, the cost of a cup of tea is almost twice more expensive than its main price.

Consequently

, eating at

home

paves the way to save money.

On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that cooking

foods

at

home

is

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a better option in the light of its quality, gathering family

members

together and its cost.

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