some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sum of money that are out of proportion to the importance of work that they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement and what_s your opinion.

There is no doubt that entertainment and multinational company professionals are earning enormous in comparison with workers like nurses, doctors and teachers and as per trend the difference in earning is going to ballooned in coming years as well. In my opinion, professionals in health and teaching occupation should be paid more or at par with respect to film actors or company bosses as former professionals help to build a healthy nation and later help in developing the nation.

Firstly

, earning

doctorate degree

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a doctorate degree

is not an easy task, it involves a couple of years hard work and dedication in

study

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the study

. If these professionals are not paid well, which will lead to dissatisfaction among them, due to which they will not perform their work with full dedication

as a result

this

leads to ill health of communities.

Also

, as per

research

Suggestion
the research

that if a professional is not paid well, he will not perform their duty with full determination.

Secondly

, education professionals are those who can build the

natiosn

a politically organized body of people under a single government
nation
nations

if they pass correct and valuable education and knowledge to their country_s youth. If they are not satisfied with their

earning

the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
earnings

,

this

can hinders

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can hinder

the nation_s progress.

Also

, is a profession is not

rewarding

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rewarded

it will

leads

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lead

to shortage of workforce of those professionals, which can harshly impact the nation_s growth.

Therefore it

Accept comma addition
Therefore, it_s
Therefore it_s

necessary to maintain

a

Suggestion
an

equilibrium among all professions.
To conclude, professionals like nurses, doctor and teacher should be on the top of highly paid professions category to make the citizens healthy and students knowledgeable.

Therefore

,

it

it is
it_s

necessary to pay more to the professionals like nurses, doctors and teacher in comparison with film actors and company_s bosses.

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