Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

What a cruel world that

allow

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humans to kill another living being just in order to survive. Over centuries, humanities relied heavily on animals in their daily diets. They used their flesh in

serveral

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several

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plates_ decorations without any emotional consideration to the other part.

Therefore

, I strongly agree with certain people who are changing their eating habits from meat to vegetables for two principal causes : health and ethics.

Recently, we are suspecting a significant portion of our societies

who

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are adapting healthy regimes.

In fact, many

dietatians

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dietitians
dieticians

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tend to convince their patients of the benefits of

vegetarian

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a vegetarian

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lifestyle in order to avoid severe issues on their bodies at old age.

For instance

, Legumes can replace chicken or fish

beacuse

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they contain

same

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the same

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nutritional facts like protein and metals. Another reason to maintain

these food

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this food startegy

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startegy

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strategy

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is to remain fit and well at

same

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the same

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time. Many athletes are showing us that using fruit shakes with

dialy

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daily

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exercices

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exercises

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will provide us with both physical and mental energy, great heart condition and efficient blood circulation.

Secondly

, it is very unhuman what we are doing to the animals that

supposed

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are supposed

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to have an equal chance with other species living on earth. The population had increased

enormesly

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enormously

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in the

last

few decades, and their nature demands grow especially in the food industry. As result, these factories are using

awfull

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awful

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methods against these beasts in

plan

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a plan
the plan

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to produce more rapidly.

Many

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Much

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enviromental

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environmental

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association

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associations

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are presenting very disrespectful scenes on media that are not supposed to be used. I honestly will defend a small cat if I see a group of kids are torturing it, so why we are

allwowing

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allowing

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other

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others

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to

sluttering

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cluttering
spluttering
sputtering

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them cold-blooded.

In my conclusion, part of our communities start to

wake-up

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wake up

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, and it realizes that we can choose a way of nutrition that will not harm our other partners on

this

planet. I hope that every government, charity or organization will make an end

for

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these mean activities for the good of our future generations.

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