Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an often argued issue that the high

school

students should be worked in

a

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volunteer

work

to society, some say that

this

is a mandatory part of high

school

programmes.

However

, in

this

essay, I strongly agree with

this

statement for the two reasons

such

as gain real-world

experience

and help to

future

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career.

To begin

with, an unpaid task gives a real-world

experience

to students when they are studying in a high

school

.

In other words

, when a pupil goes to

work

in a charity for free of cost while he will be learned a lot of information beyond their_s comfort zone, they can get a real

experience

through an unpaid task.

For example

, if a high

school

student works in

underprevileged

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areas, she would be known about their_s lifestyle and how they suffer to earn and attain basic needs,

consequently

, she might be changed to herself when after finishing free of

work

because she knew actual life is what. Obviously,

this

idea should be a

mantadory

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part of high

school

curriculams

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curriculum

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.

Secondly

,

this

volunteer task can be gotten a

bettr

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job with

handsome

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salary. What I mean by

this

, many corporate companies are expected not only the

canditates

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candidate_s

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academic performance but

also

the social

work

certficate

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too and the employer will evaluate to applicant_s helping mind. For

instances

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, if you want a job of any

service based

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companies, they would be expected of

volunteer

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a volunteer

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experience

certificate.

Therefore

, high

school

programmes must have

an

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apply

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unpaid

working

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for

a

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free performance of learners.

To conclude,

this

essay argued that the learners will

be get

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more benefits from

an unpaid activities

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to communities when they study in high schools. in my opinion, about

this

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details

such

as gaining real-world

experience

and getting a good job in future.

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