There is an opinion that high and middle
is important to reach success, but
there are some views that working after school is better than spending time for
. I think that high
is a necessity for some, even more professions, but some persons in our day, who reach success without high
make an opinion that it is a reality to be rich without a
, there are some types of job, which does not require high
as a business. In our day, there are some very rich
that have achieved success, even they brought a
, Mark Zuckerberg left out Harvard. And there are have alike businessmen. Looking to them, in our community has formed a view that a
is unnecessary. But not every
became a businessman and not everybody has a talent,
as have Zuckerberg. At
gives a basic knowledge, the concept and shows a direction. Personally, for me, it was very helpful. I have understood it when I got a job.
, there are some professions without which it is impossible to build a career.
, a doctor. If a human wants to be a doctor and help
, he needs to take appropriate knowledge, which gives only
. It is important at least for
, who are being treated. So in our
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many employers require a
. Because they give
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many tips of every specialices. Even to be an engineer or architect, even a law needs to know
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is not always just a paper.
In conclusion, I would like to remain again that universities and colleges are affected to become a lifestyle of human.
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, which has high
, will feel more cultural and intelligent. He will strive to reach more end more. Intelligent
are building a big country.
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