Some people believe that range of technology currently is increasing gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing opposite . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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According to some, the technological revolution is currently creating a huge disparity between the wealthy and

unwealthy

difficult to use or handle or manage because of size or weight or shape
unwieldy

group of people. While others believe

in the opposite idea

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the opposite idea

.

However

, I support the former statement as I strongly believe that the new technological innovation is the paramount reason for creating

such

differences among people.

To commence with, technological advancements have drastically changed the world we live in and made our life much more pragmatic than we ever anticipated.

Although

most of these gadgets are eye catching, most of them are very expensive.

Therefore

, only affluent population can buy them and those in

destitude

poor enough to need help from others
destitute

cannot.

For example

, in the developing countries, only a few percent of the population can buy

ipads

a number of sheets of paper fastened together along one edge
pads

,

iphones

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iPhones
iphones_
iphone_s

mac book

,

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,

expensive cameras and many more. Not only

this

, many cannot even afford basic household appliances. They have to perform everything manually.

This

shows the disparity in the living standard between rich and poor

people which

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people, which

creates imbalances and has

detrimental effect

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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects

.

From the other perspective, with these advancements, internet has become relatively cheaper.

Thus

, with the help of different social media platform,

all the

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all, the

general population can virtually connect and interact with each other. With time, they may develop

bond

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bonds

and friendship.

This

reduces the segregation created in the society.

Furthermore

, it gives

platform

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a platform

for every

indivisual

a human being
individual

to express their feelings and talent, regardless of their background.

For instance

, many people from poor economic background are currently opening channels

in

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on

youtube

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YouTube

and expressing their talent. Through

this

they are able to generate income for their family.

Thus in

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Thus, in

conclusion, I support the view that these technological gadgets are the main reason for creating differences among different classes of people.

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