Some people believe that modern games do not develop skill in children.However traditional games developed skills in childhood.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Individuals argue that outside

games

played by the prior generation perform a better role in advancing

children

_s abilities than

the

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electronic ones do. I partially agree with

this

, because

although

outside playing can improve physics and sociability, in-home playing can boost creativity.

To begin

with, the main reason why I believe that the

games

nowadays do not advance some of the

children

_s skills is due to their lack of mobility and,

consequently

, physical activities. As they normally need to be attached

into

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a device, kids spend most of their time in front of a TV,

instead

of running or jumping which are important in developing physical balance whilst growing.

For instance

, kids who jump rope are more likely to be athletic in

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than those who do not.

Another reason to justify

this

notion is the role that most traditional

games

performs in increasing

children

_s interaction. To illustrate

this

, musical chairs and hide-and-seek needs several people to be fun.

Moreover

, the latter

one

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also

demands strategy from the players to not be found, so creating a plan with peers can help in maintaining an interesting game.

Although

, the current

games

also

have an advance that

need

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to be pointed. Several electronic

games

demands

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creativity to solve the issue, as they usually have a history telling between phases that needs the player attention to catch important

informations

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which can be used during.

Therefore

,

problem solving

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and being creative is

also

a required task and which is worked.

To conclude, I somewhat agree with the trend that

children

_s

games

played prior to the ones developed currently are better to improve physical and social skills in infancy.

However

,

the

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modern

games

can improve imagination.

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