Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays some governments are changing their policies by allowing to work after

age

60. Some argue that

this

development will provide major benefits for the societies. I  completely disagree with those people based on some facts which I will discuss in

this

essay.

Firstly

, currently there is a huge competition for employment around the world for all of the

age

categories. If governments permit older people to work,

as a result

,

majority

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the majority

of younger crowd will be left unemployed.

Although

, most youngsters lack of experience in the job perspective, they are the spirit of a nation. Another factor involves with

this

is when these youngsters left without a proper work or an income they tend to select illegal activities

such

as stealing, misleading people.

Moreover

, they may even

forced

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force

to do drugs because of

bad influence

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the bad influence
bad influences

of the their crime partners.

Secondly

, considering the economical aspect of the problem. Young people are the most energetic in a society.

Hence

, they would produce most efficient workforce of

an

to or toward the inside of
in

any country.

Working capacity

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The working capacity

of the people over

age

60 is less compared to

the young

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younger
the younger

ones.

Therefore

, it would be beneficial for

economy

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the economy

of a nation and the employers if old people forced to retire at a certain

age

.

Furthermore

, when a person

reach

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reaches

the

age

of 60

that is

their final stage of the life,

thus

they should enjoy it restfully rather

then

conjunction used in comparatives
than

running

over

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after

the money.

In a nutshell, providing employment for older people would not be

such

a good idea after all because it would reduce the employment opportunities for the young leading them to criminal activities not only that, it would affect the economy and will make the older people restless. Because of that I totally disagree with

this

statement.

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