It is sometimes believed that minors should only play at home until they are
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the verge of adulthood while some are of the opinion that schooling should commence as early as possible.
essay intends to discuss the benefits associated with the
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.
,
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of
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developmental
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is one of the numerous advantages of
development.
is because the
environment is
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different from that of home and is purposely structured for learning through various means. At the learning
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, children are
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healthy competition with their fellow classmates and
enhances brain development as well as
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them able to perform a task
expected of their age bracket. To illustrate, my little nephew who was giving birth
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on the 6th of December 2020 had difficulty with speech as he could only mumble some words but two weeks after he was enrolled in the
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section of the Good Shepherd nursery
John became fluent with words.
, one cannot only attain an expected milestone but can as well learn how to socialize with people who are not family members. Children are
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by nature and would only
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to be attended to by their immediate family members if not only by their mothers
is because
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the baby has developed trust
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them as they are his
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.
, starting
in time gives them the opportunity to see other toddlers and
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with them as socialization gives room for
learning.
In conclusion, though some people think that children should be given time to vibe at home and start
later. While
might not be totally out of place, I think there are valuable benefits associated with early
enrollments.
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