It is often argued that it is okay to stop trying and accept
The noun phrase horrible situation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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that
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happening to us,
as
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paid
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or bad grades. I personally disagree with the view and think that with should at least try to improve our
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.
On the one hand, people keep telling us accepting bad
is one way to be grateful. It’s often said that other people have it worse,
why we have to be thankful for what we have right now.
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we should be grateful
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our job even though is bad
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since other people might not have a job.
, that kind of mindset is bad since it would make society lazy and unwilling to make changes for
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better world. They would keep thinking there
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someone who
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it worse.
,
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to improve our
would make the current conditions better and eventually we would achieve the
that we
wanted. To elaborate, to achieve the condition that we want, we don’t have to do big changes right away, we can start by doing something small.
, if we
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on money, we can try to improve that by saving money little by little at the end of each
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. It might take a long time, but at least our live’s improve bit by bit each
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.
,
why I think it’s better to
It appears that the verb improve should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.
improve our current
rather than not doing anything.
In conclusion, I think it’s better to try even a little bit rather than just accepting bad
.
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