Some people argue that technological interventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

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It_s noticeable that the advanced devices

is making

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are making

people life more convenient.

However

,

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,

it

also bring

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also brings
has also brought
is also bringing

issues that people are mostly using

cellphone

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cell phones
cell phone
a cell phone

to communicate with others rather

then

conjunction used in comparatives
than

physically

social

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socially

with others

.

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.

In fact, I totally agree

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situation which

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essay shall

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse

.
The advanced devices

is making

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are making

people life

more simple

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simpler

, but it

alleviate

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alleviates

people to contact

to

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with

other

any of various alternatives; some other
another

in

personally

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person

. More specifically, people will

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