Some e[perts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school . Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the globalization era,

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to speak outside our mother language

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crusial

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then

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ever. It could help us to connect and interact with people

arround

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the world.

Thus

, the earlier for us to learn

this

capability, the better the results. A question

then

rise whether or not it is necessary to teach

this

to the pupils in the elementary school. In

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essay, I will cover both pros and cons

for

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this

question.

Teaching a foreign language early will bring several advantages for the students.

Firstly

, kids in the primary period often learn something more effectively.

For example

, in

a

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research done by some experts, children under

age

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of ten will grasp and implement more

skill

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with the same methods of learning if compared with

more

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mature

one

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.

Secondly

, by giving these kids

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a head

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time, they will get more chances to practice.

Thus

, resulting in more fluent capability in the real life.

The downside of letting

this

type of ability being

practiced

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early in their life is mainly around the confusion caused by it.

For instance

, the children who were allowed to practice

foreign speaking

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will get confused when having

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a conversation
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conversation

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in their home or in their daily activities due to the complex thinking caused by

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multi-linguistic

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multi

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linguistic brain. They tend to have difficulties

to express

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some words.

In addition

to that, they

also

tend to have

harder

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time giving

a

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full meaning sentences when speaking with other people without mixing the

languanges

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In summary, giving chances for primary school pupils to learn

foreign speaking

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will give more advantages than the negative effects. The key to

the

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successful results is to let teachers and parents having

collaboration

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with each other to give more impact and supervision to the children.

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