Some construction work is being done on the street where you live for the last couple of days. The noise from the work is loud and it disturbs you. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the noise. In your letter, *  introduce yourself *  explain how the noise is causing problems to you *  suggest solutions to the problem

9 April 2022 IELTS IN EASY STEPS Writing 0

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Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Sheldon Cooper, and I live in Bukit Desa Condominium, which is

next

to Midvalley mall in Taman Desa. I am wiring

this

letter to lodge a formal complaint about the disturbance occurring due to road construction work in nearby areas

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where I live.

Since road repair work is going on

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one week every day and night, it is hard for us to concentrate. Naturally, due to heavy machinery and tools, it is quite loud. In fact, louder than the government_s official standards.

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made a negative impact on

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out

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life

such

as

,

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me and my neighbours suffers from a headache.

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, students cannot focus on their

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because of disturbance.

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, night repair works afflict our sleep

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as well as our health.

Therefore

, I would like to ask you to assign more human power to complete the work as soon as possible.

Also

, it would be great if you make the noise stop at night time, so we, people can sleep well.

Yours faithfully,

Sheldon Cooper

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