Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Sports

are changed over the past few years. Big companies and

sports

business have collaborated with each other. Some individuals opine that

this

makes a positive. While others are taking it as the disadvantages.

This

assignment intends to delve into both perspectives and I believe that

advertisement

through

sports

has more privilege to seek customers.

It is undeniable that

people

are obsessed with

sports

. They are love to watched games on tv or purchased tickets to watch live entertainment. Due to

this

, the marketing strategy

team

had an idea to an alliance with the

sports

team

to advertise their products. They both have an advantage with

this

.

Team

management has taken huge cheque from the company and put their logo on the

team

_s shirt and the company_s name seen by thousands or millions of

people

through their favourite

team

.

People

did whatever their favourite player does in their life. They buy that product that

advertise

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by them.

On the other hand

, a few drawbacks come with

this

, some teams support drinking and smoking products which are not good for young adults. Most of their followers are teenagers and youth. Both are crazy about

sports

.

Furthermore

, players are busier in

advertisement

on tv, they forget about their training schedule and

this

effect seen on their performance at the match. Sometimes, their teammate

have

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faced

the

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terrible situation for only one player in the

team

.

To conclude, I feel that the advantage of

advertisement

overlaps the disadvantage. By showing

advertisement

by

team

player has beneficial for them. They get money for

this

and

people

are more aware of the product through them.

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