Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent you agree or disagree

While many opine that technological inventions have done more harm than good, inevitably making

life

more complex, whereas in order to lead

life

to the fullest we ought to simplify it by ceasing

technology

use..

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However in

my opinion, despite some shortcomings, moving away from existing

technology

is seemingly impractical.

Do you control your phone or does your phone controls you? One of the most compelling reasons that

technology

has made

life

complicated today is rendering people perpetually available as it truly runs our lives.

for

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For

instance, In the past, a worker might work nine to five

then

come home, have dinner, spend time with family, and enjoy a private

life

.

However

,

this

simply is no longer the case. While one works ends, you are still

pulled

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pulling

back by email notifications and phone calls from the manager or coworkers which lead to complicated lifestyle.

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if a sustainable balance is not achieved between work and personal

life

,

technology

can be counterproductive.

What will one do if

technology

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the technology

is unplugged?

although

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Although

life

has become more complicated and

this

is a negative development, shutting yourself off from

technology

would only serve to isolate people from the word, no Netflix to watch, no games to play, nobody to text, and nothing to scroll through.

a

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A

study revealed, quitting from technological inventions contributed to anxiety, loneliness, and a sense of inadequacy.

hence

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Hence

, with

soo

to a very great extent or degree
so

much important information in

this

little technological boxes, it seems definitely unrealistic shutting them.

In conclusion,

although

technology

has hurt people, turning away from it is not feasible today without making drastic sacrifices.

Instead

, people ought to seek ways to compartmentalize

technology

in order to live happier, more satisfying lives

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