In the current society, technology using become the most
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in each individual’s life,
as social
,becoming increasingly popular among all
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.
, sharing personal information on social
websites
have risks. Overall, I intend to consider that the advantages of social
outweigh the disadvantages.
Admittedly, Social
is one of the most important technology products that all
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are using, especially among teenagers and
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.
, lot of apps,
as billboards,
can listen to music on the way to work or home for relaxing themselves, checking breaking news on the
from all over the world, publishing their own opinion or
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for sharing with
on youtube or
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. Some of them even become popular through youtube or
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,
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both producers and viewers.
, there are
some risks among
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social
if
are over-exploded themselves on
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.
, some hackers may use some
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personal information to hack their bank account ,
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will have
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loss.
, if
shared some personal opinion but major viewers have different comments,they might risk internet bullying, hurting their family,
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, causing mental issues.
To conclude,
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there will be some risks while sharing personal information on social
. the trend in the current society is social
.
shall take care which they want to share on some social
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tools and they have to be mentally ready
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to do if they have to face different voices from social
.
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