Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In the modern

world

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social

media

is an inevitable factor. It connects

people

with each other and

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about

on time

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news flash and incidents.

Eventhough

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view

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there are more negative sides than positive as will be now discussed.

To begin

with benefits, the social web has

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contribution in communication nowadays when compared to

past

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.

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, before

people

communicate only through letters and telephone calls if they were in

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distance but these days it is very easy to stay in touch with friends and family by social

media

platforms like

whatsapp

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,

messanger

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and

wechat

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.

Furthermore

,

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the editorials are

easly

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available through

you tube

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,

twitter

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and all. Now,

people

can watch and discover every news instant and express their own opinions and commands

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of the public.

Despite these, the social network

have

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prominent

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role in damaging

of

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youth

mind

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to criminal situations.

For instance

, presently society is addicted to internet-based social networking. They are keen to watch adventures as well as crime stories and follow the same in the real life. Mostly,

the

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social

media

such

as

facebook

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and

instagram

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provides

such

videos and young

people

showing

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the same to catch up others attention.

This

will

ended

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in death or murder.

Moreover

,

people

are very interested to take selfies and upload

in

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social

media

. For

that

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they are choosing some weird situations and results

to

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danger.

Also

now in

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, members

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have time to speak

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other because they are spending more time

in

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the social webs.

Hence

, they

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family respect and warm relationships.

In conclusion,

the

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social networks are influencing

lifestyle

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of society a lot.

People

are misusing these advancements results in consequences.

However

, When used in a charitable way, it can do good for society.

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