One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

“The

life

expentancy

an expectation
expectancy

is growing due to the advantages of medicine,

nowdays

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now days

that is

one of the benefits for the humanity. From my point of view I recognize the importance of the investigation

on

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in

this

field because of benefits and increase the quality

life

of people around all the

world regardless

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world, regardless

their social or economic level to give the chance to live more years and be more productive

futhermore

in addition
furthermore

giving the people the possibility to be healthier and enjoyable until their

last

days of

life

, decreasing the risk of a surprise death and that_s why the advantages are higher than the disadvantages.

In

consequence one

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consequence, one

of the principal benefits is give the opportunity of everyone in any part of the world has access to a

qualificated

medicine, decreasing the risk of deaths for the non-access system health

,

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,

and many cases the population without that kind of cares don_t live enough to work and

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop

themselves in

an

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a

working class,

for

example if

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example, if

one father of family die because of a sick which

whith

expresses the means used
with

an accurate cares is not mortal, that represents a victory to his family and in a future it will add with his work economic benefits to all around them.

To add my point of view people with a longer and

digny

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dingy
deny

life

will be happy and enjoy their moments, won_t live with fears about their health and possibly will

apport

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experience for the new generations, is very common that

granparents

a parent of your father or mother
grandparents

gives

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give

greatest moments for their relatives and if the medicine could extend their

life

it could generate a better family

,

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,

more linked and with

amazing sense

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an amazing sense

of

life

.

To resume I think the advantages upper the disadvantages and the medical care should keep improving their fields and extending the

life

for a healthier and happy society.”

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