Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion

We are living in a century that much

informations

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information
pieces of information

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are published in magazines, newspaper, books and

specially

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especially

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on

internet

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the internet

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. Many peoples believe that it is good to share as much as possible

such

as scientific research and others believe that some

information

should be kept confidential.

Information

is important to get knowledge,

for example

, when I was studying I had a lot of assessments and I read many articles to present a good job. In

this

case, more

information

is better to learn more.

Other

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Another

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example is when you want to sell a product and you do not describe it as much as you can, most

of

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apply

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people

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the people

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will not be interested.

Thus

,

this

kind of

information

is important to share as much as you can.

In

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On

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the other hand,

many

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apply

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some

information

such

a

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apply

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scientific research can not be published.

For example

, laboratories do tests to approve some medicine and a

couple

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ofcouple

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months before I was invited to participate

for

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in

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a test. It was a test for a new medicine to headache and they sent me a confidential contract

,

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apply

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because there are some

informations

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information
pieces of information

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if sharing can be dangerous and too valuable.

In my opinion,

informations

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information
pieces of information

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such

as academic, business, articles should be shared as long as it is correct and true to help people get more knowledge, but personal

information

, scientific research,

police

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policy

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information

should be retained.

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