Now a days the governments are spending more on science relates subjects as they think that this improves the development of a nations. Do you agree or disagree with this.

There is no doubt that the governments are investing more time

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science

since they believe it helps the

nation

_s growth. In my essay, I will explain the reasons for their interest

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science

, and how it connects to the best interest of the

country

.

To begin

with, exploration leads to discovery and commercial implementation of the discovery results in innovation.

This

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product innovations help the

nation

_s

economy

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growth.

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, the growth of communication is much advanced while comparing to the past. Everyone uses

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phone

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, Wi-Fi to access all information around the world.

Hence

, it increases the profit of the communication service providers, and they contribute to the

country

by paying taxes, which accumulates to

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percentage of total

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.

Secondly

, innovation in medical

science

requires experimentation to find

better

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cure with

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side-effects

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.

Also

, it is crucial for any

country

to provide

an

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appropriate medical care to their citizens. Ultimately, saving thousands of human lives.

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, Cholera killed many thousands of people and it is vaccine discovery helped to cure

such

life threatening

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diseases.

Moreover

, it requires constant attention throughout the years to be prepared for any diseases.

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, it deserves

nation_s

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time and energy

into

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it

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.

To sum up, it is necessary to spend more time on

science

for the

nation

_s interest. Since it contributes to the commercial sector and in turn enhancing the

country

_s financial health.

Also

, investing more

on

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medical

science

helps in saving human lives.

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