Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Our world has been changed enormously by modern

technology

. Where the different modes of communication brought people closer to each other,

technology

is destroying the cultural differences as well.

However

, I believe that there are more positives than negatives that

technology

can bring. I will explain both in the following paragraphs.

There are a plethora of advantages of

technology

.

Firstly

, learning has become very convenient through it. People who have any disability, or not allowed to go out from their homes, can now easily gain knowledge about several fields, just on one click.

Nevertheless

, it keeps the works running. In

this

Covid situation

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if the factories were closed and would not use

technology

to operate, we were sure to die with hunger. If the work would stop,

then

the countries would fall with a very critical condition, but

technology

keeps everybody alive.

As where is light, there is dark as well;

similarly

,

technology

has some disadvantages if used by the culprit mind people. The misuse of

technology

can be disastrous.

For example

, it can be used for making atomic bombs and/or fatal viruses that

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the ability to finish

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hole human breed.

To conclude,

technology

Is made to brighten our future, if it will be used for

this

purpose only

then

there is no question regarding its advantages and disadvantages for us; but if it goes in wrong hands of evil-minded people,

then

there is no solution for that as well.

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