Many youngsters do unpaid work to help their local community,which benefits both themselves and society.Some people believe that all teenagers should thus be required to do unpaid work in their free time. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been commonly debated that,i

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cent years majority o

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the recent years majority

f teenagers work as a voluntary for local society in order to help people ,

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spite it is hard to find any time in he

ctic lifestyle ,

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a hectic lifestyle

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wever people claim that all young adults have to work in their leisure time.I agree with

this

proposal that working free of charge has ad

vantagesous f

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages

or both community and youngsters.

First

of all,b

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ing voluntary boost teenagers_ social and re

letionship s

a relation between people; (_relationship_ is often used where _relation_ would serve, as in _the relationship between inflation and unemployment_, but the preferred usage of _relationship_ is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship

kills because of giving the opportunity to develop their social skills since meeting a different group of people with common interests.It is ea

iser t

posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easier

o branch out,m

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ke more friends and contacts.

For instance

, while some people are superb at their social life and re

letionship ,

a relation between people; (_relationship_ is often used where _relation_ would serve, as in _the relationship between inflation and unemployment_, but the preferred usage of _relationship_ is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationships

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wever there some who are shy to make new friends can make enlarge th

eir a

objective case of they
them

round through voluntary job.

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lunteering help adults to gain excellent experience in order for their career .

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ery young person wants to be su

cessful worker,

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successful workers
successful worker
a successful worker

manager or employer.

As a result

, when they do unpaid work it increases the chance to acquire crucial abilities ,

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ch as organization, teamwork, co

mmunacation,

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication

task management ,

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oblem solving and the most important one which is being mature that used in the workplace.As an example, if volunteers hold a su

cessful s

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful

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sales

osition ,

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ey can raise awareness ,

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ile developing marketing skills and public speaking which includes to co

mmunacation a

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication

ptitudes.
To recapitulate, community service plays si

cnificant role i

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a significant role
significant role

n youngsters_ lives because of obtaining de

sparetly g

with great urgency
desperately

reat knowledge for their life goals.I consider that youth can el

eviate t

give a promotion to or assign to a higher position
elevate
alleviate

heir job prospects undoubtedly.

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