Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believed that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

Nowadays,

advertisement

is crucial for every field of

products

or services.

However

, there are some kinds of

products

which are controversial whether they

is

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proper to advertise; one of these is fast

food

. Some

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had a belief that it is not

right

to present

fast

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fast-food

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food

ads while others thought that fast

food

also

had

right

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the right

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to be advertised. Personally, I am convinced that junk

food

companies should have the

right

to present their

products

due to companies_ rights,

customers

_

freedom

, and economy.

Firstly

, fast

food

brands have their own rights to show their

products

. In the world of

advertisement

,

although

there are some

products

which

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are not permitted to sell to the public, fast

food

has

the

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permission to advertise in the public.

Similarly

, the companies

also

have their rights to have an ad. So, the

right

of

fast

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fast-food

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food

brands to advertise should not be

constrainted

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constrained
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.

Secondly

,

customers

has

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their

freedom

to see

advertisement

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an advertisement

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. They should not be limited

what

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they are going to engage

.

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in.

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Fast

food

is just one of the

food

products

, similar to others.

Moreover

, they have their own

freedom

to eat what they would like to eat. So, fast

food

advertisement

shoud

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should

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not be unpermitted to

customers

.

Finally

, fast

food

is one

the

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lucrative

products

for countries and malls. When you commute within your city, fast

food

shops are prevalent. Numerous people_s favourite

food

is fast

food

. It

make

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lots of profit to local areas, malls, or countries which have

fast

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fast-food

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food

shops.

Subsequently

, the economy of those countries will be great.

In conclusion, I have a thought that fast

food

firms should have the

right

to present their fast

food

to the public. It is

beacuse

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because

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of the

customers

_

freedom

, profit, and brands_

right

.

Lastly

,

customers

should consider what they are going to buy.

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