Many people believe children should begin learning a foreign language in primary school instead of secondary school. Do you think the advantages of learning a foreign language in primary school outweigh the disadvantages?j

In today_s world, it is believed by some part of the population that

children

should start learning a foreign language when they are in a primary

school

rather

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in a secondary

school

.

This

essay will discuss whether the advantages of

this

outweigh its disadvantages.

First

of all,

to begin

with, the main benefit of

this

approach is the fact that it is easier for young people to learn a new language.

This

is because of the fact that not only does their brain work differently comparing to adult_s but

also

they are more predisposed to have

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memory.

Therefore

, learning new vocabulary and grammar is

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to be perceived easier by

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during their childhood.

For example

, recent research has shown that the adult_s ability to

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is 20% lower than that of

children

.

Moreover

, another reason why primary schools should provide students with classes of foreign languages is that they have a lighter schedule.

This

is due to the fact

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only are there fewer lessons and tests but

also

there are fewer subjects.

Hence

,

children

are able to devote more time to the process of learning a new language.

For instance

, one survey has shown that at a

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school

learners have 2 times less time

that

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they can devote to extra studying.

Eventually, to conclude, I think the advantages of

this

approach far outweigh its disadvantages since,

firstly

,

children

_s ability to

memrise

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is better and,

secondly

, in a primary

school

they are

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to have more time

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they can spend studying languages.

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