Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally crucial for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Economy

is the setting of every cultural activity in a

society

,” Marx said.

Although

many governments consider economic development as their primary job, some citizens believe the

economy

should not be politicians_

first

concern and priority. In

this

regard, I am in agreement with Marx and believe economical progress is the most important duty of any government.

On the one hand, undeniably

economy

is one of the essential elements in human

society

.

That is

because every human activity is formed based on the

economy

, so

that is

the government_s job to supervise and conduct it.

For example

, the difference between communist countries and others can show perfectly the relation of

economy

and all human activities. If the government does not meddle in the economical status of a

country

, there would be no united source for evaluating achievements, and soon it will become a disaster.

On the other hand

, there is

this

idea that many other activities can be considered necessary as the

economy

.

In other words

, some people believe a

society

can gain

advantage

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and productivity through other cultural achievements like art, literature, and natural resources.

For instance

, the Netherland is a

country

with a high potential of presenting flowers.

Although

this

is a fantastic achievement, in the end, it can not be evaluated by any system but the

economy

. If there were no

economy

in the picture, an exchanging system would form, which is not money-based, but still is economical.

After all, I believe the

economy

has the most crucial role in

society

.

That is

because it is the reference of evaluation and prioritization of cultural phenomena based on their potentials.

In conclusion, despite some people_s idea of underestimating the

economy

_s role

in

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country

management, there is

this

theory that the

economy

is the most crucial element that should be considered in major decision-making in a

country

. I believe, based on many defeated communist economies, it is proved that

this

element is the most important one in

society

. I hope, in the future, when we look at major policies in our countries, we will have been able to see

economy

has been the main considered element in all decisions.

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