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The bar chart provides information about the main exports in Southland in the period of 2000, 2022 and 2025.

It can be seen from the graph that there was a steady rise in international tourism in comparison to meat products, which showed a decline in their numbers.

Moreover

, dairy products indicated some fluctuation.

In 2000, approximately 8

billion

pound

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contributed to international tourism, which was the highest export reason in that

year

.

Then

it climbed

up

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to nearly £9

billion

in 2000 and reached a peak of about 10 in the final

year

.

Dairy products started at almost 7 at the beginning.

Afterward

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it

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, it showed a rapid increase to around 10

billion

, which reached the same rate as

ionternational

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tourism in 2025.

Finally

, the number decreased slightly with 0,5 in the predicted

year

. Regarding meat export, in 2000 they shipped exactly 6

billion

meat.

This

figure fell to about 5,5 in 2022 and plunged to £ 5

billion

in the

last

year

.

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