It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are causes? And what will be effected on society?

Presently, many countries around the world do not have many students who choose to

study

science course. From my point of view, there are a lot of reasons and effects

about

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ublic.

Every school has many subjects at present like Math, Science,etc.

However

, the most that people did not choose are Science, so there are many reasons why people like to

study

other subjects because Science is very hard and divided at 3 sections are Physics,

Chemisty

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and Biology, so there are not only have a lot of

informations

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, but

also

many specific words, so learners can not remember all

ot

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them.

Moreover

, some people think that it is so boring and it is not their types.

Thus

, they believe that if they choose to

study

it, they will not have good scores.

On the other hand

, there are a lot of effects that the world will encounter because if school do not have any people learn Science course, countries will not have scientists, their countries will not develop.

For example

, Covin 19 spread around the world at present. If countries do not have any scientists, they will do not have

vaccins

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to protect people_ health and they can die, so

this

is the main effect if learner

do

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not

study

about Science and they should

to

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choose

this

cause for dangerous situations will happen in the future.

To sum up, more and more people look that children in many countries do not learn Science course.

However

, there are many causes

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and many effects that people will find on society.

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