It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films, and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

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such

as

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, and

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could assist humankind to learn everything worldwide. Individuals could learn

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socio – culture

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in

spesific

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area

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effortless without physically entering

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.

although

there are arguments on both sides, due to my own beliefs,

i

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agree with

this

statement. these beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost,

people

nowadays have insufficient time according to their daily activity.

therefore

, they need a simple way to determine

kind

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of

informations

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what

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they need. Nowadays, a large number of

informations

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could be provided by

website

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.

For Instance

,

a smartphones

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able

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to reach any material anywhere in order to

fulfilling

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individuals curiosities. Google as

search

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engine could

provides

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enormous

informations

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about society and development

for example

.

Furthermore

, it can

preserving

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people

money rather

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using private vehicles or public

transportations

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.

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and

textbook

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are other competitive sources to gain

informations

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, they can produce audio and

visual

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to entertain

people

.

First

,

people

can learn about cow-boy or medieval ages through

historical

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movie

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,

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and study vegetation by National Geographic channel or

text book

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as well.

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, Books

price

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and

movie

tickets are more affordable than

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airplane

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ticket

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.

In conclusion, technology would lead a large number of individuals to learn more effective and efficient ,

people

can

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less their money

in

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vacations.

This

is why in my

pont

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of view, travel is not important due to determine socio-culture

knowlegde

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