In today_s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this question?

More and more

school

leavers are deciding to take a gap year before continuing their education. While some suggest that

this

trend is without merit, I believe it benefits students for three reasons.

Firstly

, taking a break from education can allow students to gain valuable work experience in their chosen field, which gives them a real taste of employment. While I accept that students might lose

certain amount

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a certain amount

of

time

during the career break, I think it

effects

have an effect upon
affects

positively because they could work for an organization as a volunteer.

As a result

, they could grasp enough knowledge, skills and conceive real goals of their future study and job.

Another key reason is self-development. After finishing

school

student would have enough

time

to contemplate about their possible future action or read books. In fact, it is really essential for every individual to pay attention to self- development and personality. So,

time

between finishing

school

and starting university is most suitable for that

actions

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action

.

The main reason why I believe taking a break between

school

and university is a good idea is academic burn-out. It means if

student

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a student
the student

takes a year off before commencing their

further

study or job, they would have spare

time

to relax and recharge their

battery

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batteries

after

hustle

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the hustle

and bustle of

school

life. Eventually, it prevents them from an early academic burn-out which makes them redundant to their study or job

otherwise

.

In conclusion,

although

some believe that

this

lifestyle would be disadvantageous for students, in my

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, it

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it is far more advantageous for the aforementioned three reasons.

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