In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement

There is no doubt that the

internet

has changed the way we execute our work and its results

especially

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online

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. Some individuals argue that in future, no one will purchase paper books, gazettes and magazines because the trend of studying

news

online is spreading among

masses

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. I completely agree with the view that online reading of articles and ebooks showing

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trend and are widely accepted and recommended by many individuals.

On the one hand, Online reading of eBooks, magazines and brochures are quite easily accessible and downloadable. Many different types of

information

like daily happening around the nation and the world, companies and brands

information

, can be available with a click of

button

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of

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.

Moreover

, the

news

agencies like

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of new York, Washington times will update the content and

information

available on their websites immediately in

real time

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. So, that

it

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visitors can know the latest

information

, which

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easy to download and can be watched later.

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recent survey, conducted by

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university

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of California, states the General public interest to view

information

online, for different

contents

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has increased by almost 30% compared to 3 years earlier.

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news

access

requires an electronic

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like

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and Laptops with

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and

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battery. If a Smartphone is not properly charged or don_t have fast

access

to

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,

then

one cannot get updated online

information

available on websites. Whereas,

newspaper

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and books don_t require any sort of network connectivity and energy source to remain connected with

information

.

Consequently

, readers of

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especially elders and senior citizens, those who are not aware of technology, may find it difficult to use.

Hence

, Online reading of

news

and ebooks has

lot

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of limitations in terms of

access

to

news

and

information

.

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, I Conclude, that though Online

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of

news

articles and magazines is on

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,

nevertheless

, it has caused many hurdles related to proper network connectivity and energy source, whereas

newspaper

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and books are very easy to

access

and can be read easily to any generation of people from senior citizens, to children

also

.

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