In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Many believe that trying really hard can bring children numerous benefits and make them successful. From my point of view, the advantages of believing


message outweigh the disadvantages.

On one hand,


message is beneficial to the young generation in many ways. Children always have lots of dreams since they are at the beginning of their life, and they think everything is possible. When adults encourage them to pursue their passions and believe in them, it pushes them to become the best version of themselves through working hard and staying positive. Another benefit is that it keeps children encouraged even when they fail.

In other words

, when children grew into adults and start following their dreams, they will surely encounter hardships. If taught that persistence and hard work will get them through, they will not give up and will stay motivated.

On the other hand

, some children who believe


message may encounter some issue.


, believing everything is possible to make some children think about the impossible goal and think they can achieve them.

For instance

, they may think they can become a billionaire in 30 years, and when they reach that age, they will be disappointed and frustrated that they did not reach that goal.


, some children may push themselves to their limits and work too hard which cause them negatively and easily become sick


can be an example of children who study all the time because they want to be


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op student and suffer from mental health issues


as depression and isolation

To sum up,


it is beneficial to tell children that working hard towards a goal always yields positive results, it can cause them issues


as frustration and burnout.

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