The given pie charts demonstrate the general benefits and drawbacks based on visitors_ views.
Overall,
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visitors_ point of
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, the most disadvantage of Bowen islands is that value of living here was expensive ,whereas the local people of the
is considered as the most beneficial aspect of
place.
As far as downsides of Bowen islands is concerned, high cost of living dominate pie chart , undertaking 50
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.
, lack of entertainment facilities
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caused disapproval of visitors, taking 25
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, while weather of
and food quality took respectively 15 and 10
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.
With regards to
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side of
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, the local people are approved by visitors and
aspect took 42
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of
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. The scenery of
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is the
issue that made
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impression
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visitors and it took 35
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. Quality of
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and
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of
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are
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by guests, relatively 11 and 12
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