In some countries people encourage teenagers to find part time jobs. Some people agree and others don_t. Review both sides and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that working from a young age makes us independent and self

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. While some people believe that

this

trend should not be followed, others argue that it helps to build

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teenagers. In

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One of the most important

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of teenagers involved in

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is

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management. The

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who work in any

part

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job are mostly

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students or higher secondary students, because of their

part

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time

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they get very

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for their studies which in turn leads to bad scores in their

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, some

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includes

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morning and

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shifts, which is the most important

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for good sleep. As a

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it directly

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the productivity of

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teenagers.

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,

part

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the opportunity to experience

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world apart from studies and college life. Working experience gives the chance to learn from your own mistakes from a very young age, that

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to build

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stronger future.

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, there are some students who

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not have any financial support for their education, they can earn their living and

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their dreams, and achieve their goals

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their own.

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part

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can be proven hectic for

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generation. In my opinion benefits of

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in young generation are

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by the

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, I would prefer

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indulge my children in

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