In some areas of the US , a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to go outdoor after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. to what extend do you agree of disagree with this?

preventing teenagers from going outside after a specific time at night if they are not escorted by a grown-up is applied in some regions of the US. Personally,

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strongly agree with

this

case, and in

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I will discuss my point of view.

in the beginning, I think it is a brilliant idea to impose a curfew on

this

situation since it will be a kind of support for

parents

who are struggled to make full control of their children during

this

complicated phase; I mean a

teenager

stage. really, it is the most exhausting stage, since they tend to break up all

parents

_ rules and boundaries.so that, it is much more helpful to work as a unit with the government,

instead

of leaving the

parents

encounter their children_s difficulties alone.

moreover

,

this

restriction will limit the negative impacts yield from leaving the

teenager

outside their home alone for late time, which leads to unresponsible behaviours,sometimes.

for instance

, they may tend to go to unsafe places

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and make themselves vulnerable to the risk from dangerous people.

furthermore

, they may get used to take illegal drugs or get engaged in criminal damage. really,

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believe that

this

decision will have a vast benefit for

parents

and the government itself.

to conclude, forcing the

teenager

to stay at home after a particular time at night the right decision. and will support the

parents

to avoid different kinds of challenges with their children,

also

in general, it will decrease the number of crimes in the community and help the

teenager

to exceed

this

stage safely and without harming their selves or harming others.

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