In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,some individuals claim that it is important to build more subway lines,so authorities spend more money on

railway

systems.

In contrast

,some public

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that public transport is dominant in everyone’s life

,

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because it is convenient for all

people

.

this

essay will discuss both sides.

To embark on,In my opinion,

railway

‘s are

best

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way to commute from one place to another place.

firstly

,it is

more

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cheaper than public facilities like buses,autos.

moreover

,there is no traffic problem,so we can reach

destination

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the destination

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on time.

although

railway

facilities

available

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,

people

prefer to commute by public

vechiles

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for instance

,if we want to travel long hours

than

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we should choose only Subway,because In train ample amenities available

such

as restrooms,beds and food items.even we can sleep

on

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bed

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a bed

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,

moreover

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sometimes we find entertainment from

people

.

On another hand,it is difficult to commute by public amenities,because roads are congested and

price

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of the tickets is expensive.

additionally

,we can not reach

destination

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on time due to traffic congestion.

furthermore

,pollution from

vechiles

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is very high it leads to several skin diseases.

for example

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world

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health organisation,most

people

are struggling with skin diseases as pollution in order to reduce

this

,

people

will travel by train.sometimes both are dominant,to exemplify

this

,if we want to reach

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station,

then

we have to go

railway

station by bus or auto only.

To conclude,every

try

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to commute by train in order

to

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we can get rid of pollution.ultimately,health problems

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reduced.

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