Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species.Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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tremendously controversy` heating up a debate over

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impact of human activities on plant and

animals

. While some claims hold up a strong view that it is not enough time to do anything, the opposite makes a statement that efficient action

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situation

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should be taken. In my point of view, it is never

to

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late to take

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solution to improve

this

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, there

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abundant convincing

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that it is too late to deal with a great many

of

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immense consequences which are made by humans on

flora

and

fauna

.

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demand for parts of

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of some certain sorts of animal which is valuable to finance, health and fashion. Almost all

animals

, which are the target of hunting, are being pushed to the verge of extinction.

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, crocodiles’ skins have been one of the iconic

material

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for some leading fashion brands like Gucci or Louis Vuitton.

Therefore

, it is reasonable to say that it is too late to affect negatively

on

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plant and animal species.

While the tremendous consequences on

flora

and

fauna

which are made by people’s

action

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are widely acknowledged, there are still have abundant remedies to revamp

this

problem. Authorities or citizen should

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environmental organizations which

convinces

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and

prevents

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people to stop illegal hunting. And that

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to

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decrease in poaching rate and the conservation of

fauna

and

flora

.

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, WSPA-World Society for Protection of

Animals

is

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international organization and have

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branch in Africa, Asia , Europe, North America,… WSPA have been founded to protect

animals

and prevents illegal hunting like rhino hunted,…..

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, effective action like founding environmental organizations should be taken immediately because it has

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effect on

fauna

and

flora

In conclusion, a great deal of negative

impact

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have

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been made on

animals

and plants,

however

, it is never

to

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late to stop

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environment

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the environment

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. There are still a great many

of

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solutions to save

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