everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Food

choice is the basic right of an Individual.

Moreover

, nowadays, issues related to health are very common and it is not because of

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food

habits

alone.

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, few folks still believe that

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being vegetarian can prevent them from many diseases. But, I

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disagree with the point that, being non-vegetarian may reduce lifespan.

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essay will examine the topic in detail with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, to maintain the normal

food

chain one should eat everything as they wish. Apart from

this

, the body

need

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all the nutrients, which is present in the meat

also

like fats and protein. In fact, if the physique fails to

recieve

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the required quantity of nutritional elements, nutritional problems may arise. Vision problems and muscular

destrophy

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are the few issues related to malnutrition. To sum up, it is necessary to follow the

food

chain module to meet the nutritional demands of the body.

To continue with,

present day

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agriculture depends on fertilizers. So, the intake of vegetables alone

also

,

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can cause many health issues. The

most

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commonest one is the stomach ulcers and in

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severe state it can cause cancer

also

.

However

,

limited

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quantity of eating

habits

are

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needed for

maitaining

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optimum health. All in all, physical exercise is

also

, performed irrespective of the

food

habits

. To sum up, eating

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amount of

food

at the correct time as well as being active can help people to stay strong.

Finally

, all persons should be encouraged to eat according to their wish. To escape from the problems of imbalanced nutritional conditions,

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people should develop

the

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mixed eating

habits

with adequate quantity.

Moreover

, humans should prefer to do routine exercise

also

. So, I disagree with the opinion of, being vegetarian can save

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people from

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alarming diseases.

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