environmental problems are too big serious for individuals to solve and only big companies and govements can solve them. do you agree or disagree ?

The environment

comprenhed

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not only trees, rivers, plants, rocks, mountains, etc but

also

all the living creatures. In that sense

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the

responsability

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of taking care of the

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related to it have been raised by the argument presented lines above, which state that only big companies and

government

can solve environmental problems. Personally

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I disagree with the affirmation because I believe that big changes should occur

first

inside every

one

of us.

First

of all, the

power

of the masses is

one

of the strongest

power

that

move

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the world. Each individual

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a

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great

power

with every

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made.

For example

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regarding

to

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social media,

one

person can generate a trend, like the “ice bucket challenge”,

this

trend could serve to a good or bad cause but has

d

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irect impact in the world itself. Another point is that only

one

person

know

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as an “influencer” can take down a company, or a brand. In that sense

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if

one

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can

change

their behaviour and raise awareness and generate a trend that will create like a snowball and could have

signifcative

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impact in reducing the carbon

footprint

.

Another example is that if many individuals congregate and start to fight for a

change

. They could raise awareness about the importance of environmental problems within the

government

and like many “popular projects” , the

government

will prioritize it an actually take

action

and start to make it happen.

One

last

point to prove that

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can really make a huge impact regarding environmental problems is that even if the other actors of

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society do not take real

action

, if we as a group start to

change

our behaviours , like use less plastic, buy organic food, use reusable recipients, etc and reduce our own

footprint

in 30%,

then

we will reduce the

footprint

by 20% in our communities, 15% in the cities, 5% in the countries and

finally

1% in the world.

Even though is important to highlight the critical role of an individual is relevant to recognize the role of companies and

government

to combat environmental problems.

First

, the use of

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can help

stablish

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regulation to help to achieve less carbon

footprint

,

also

can create an incentive (reduce taxes)in order to incentive companies to take

action

.

Also

, companies through their social

responsability

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program (plant trees) can help to reduce carbon

footprint

and gain more customers appealing innovative and trendy.

Finally

,

indivuals

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can take

action

and play an important role, in order to solve environmental problems, the

power

of the masses prove that the

change

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to come from the inside of us in order for the whole society to

change

.

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