In recent years, the percentage of
has been increased due to several
.
,
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the following paragraphs will
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the causes and how to overcome these
and find the most effective ways to reduce
.
with, it is commonly believed that using
and narcotic substances will lead to
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and increase the
of
because
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these people who used
frequently or
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people
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are not truly conscious.
, the addictive person may make lots of crimes to get extra money to be able to buy more
.
, we live in an age when many of us are believe that the
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scene in lots of
will encourage and contribute
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raising the criminal
. The younger generation
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to imitate what they see in these
.
, they try to act like the actor and simulate these action scenes
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reality. Some scenarios of these
describe the culprit as a victim and give so many
to gain
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empathy from audiences.
, we need to find solutions to overcome
increasing
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. One of these strategies
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need to control and prevent using
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and narcotics material to eliminate the main reason
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rising the
of
.
, we should monitor what our children see and we need to make an effective discussion with them to illustrate and explain that , there is no excuse to do
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.
To conclude, after
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both
and some effective solutions to reduce the
of
we can say that we need to restrict and prohibit using of
to reduce
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and we should make an effective discussion with our children and monitor what they see in the
.
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