Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The

population

is increasing day by day. With the increasing

population

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there is a huge raise of

resources

that are needed. If

this

continues, for sure there will be a scarcity of all the

resources

within ten years. In the

next

,paragraphs I will mention the problems that we may face due to an increase in headcountcount and what are the possible solutions to come out of

this

.

Let us discuss the

resources

that are directly proportional to the people count. Basic things like food, water, shelter, clothes and these days education

is

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also

considered as the basic need, we are sure that all these are needed by everyone. Adding to these, transportation has

also

become an important need as it plays a vital role in daily life. So, it is evident that there should be more schools built and more vehicles manufactured.

Raise of vehicles equals to raise of environmental pollution, raise in children count equals to need for the raise in schools count. All these factors lead to the failure of satisfying the basic needs of many individuals and

moreover

add to the existing problems of global warming.

One effective solution to the above problems would be prevention. We all know the famous saying, “Prevention is always better than cure”. What I mean is “

Population

control”.

This

can be achieved by family planning. Family planning would be a more sophisticated solution. If everyone decides to give birth to one

instead

of two,

then

there will be more opportunities for the child, more food and many more. If someone desperately wants two kids,

then

adopting one child would

also

be a good gesture. I would conclude by saying, “The lesser the

population

the more the

resources

“.

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