is increasing day by day. With the increasing
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there is a huge raise of
that are needed. If
continues, for sure there will be a scarcity of all the
within ten years. In the
,paragraphs I will mention the problems that we may face due to an increase in headcountcount and what are the possible solutions to come out of
Let us discuss the
that are directly proportional to the people count. Basic things like food, water, shelter, clothes and these days education
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considered as the basic need, we are sure that all these are needed by everyone. Adding to these, transportation has
become an important need as it plays a vital role in daily life. So, it is evident that there should be more schools built and more vehicles manufactured.
Raise of vehicles equals to raise of environmental pollution, raise in children count equals to need for the raise in schools count. All these factors lead to the failure of satisfying the basic needs of many individuals and
add to the existing problems of global warming.
One effective solution to the above problems would be prevention. We all know the famous saying, “Prevention is always better than cure”. What I mean is “
can be achieved by family planning. Family planning would be a more sophisticated solution. If everyone decides to give birth to one
there will be more opportunities for the child, more food and many more. If someone desperately wants two kids,
adopting one child would
be a good gesture. I would conclude by saying, “The lesser the
the more the
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