Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is a notion that ideally, young people who are in

relationship

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a relationship

should live together

first

before legally

binded

confined by bonds
bound
bonded

, so that they have a chance to know their

partner

. I am not a proponent of

this

idea, since it does not guarantee of learning all about

person_s attributes

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the person_s attributes

and because of some legal consideration.

Living together without legal commitment could not assure of knowing everything about their

partner

, because everybody

change

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changes

in every

aspects

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aspect

over time. Some people tend to be nice in

past few years

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the past few years

of a

relationship but

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relationship, but

later become

abhorent

offensive to the mind
abhorrent
adherent

, as they experience some detrimental effects of a

relationship

. Giving up a

realtionship

a relation between people; (_relationship_ is often used where _relation_ would serve, as in _the relationship between inflation and unemployment_, but the preferred usage of _relationship_ is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship
relationships

and finding new one is not an answer, because everyone has flaws, and they do not need to be replaced but only to be accepted. There are

people despite

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people, despite

of their infuriating attitude toward their partners, still maintain a healthy

realtionship

a relation between people; (_relationship_ is often used where _relation_ would serve, as in _the relationship between inflation and unemployment_, but the preferred usage of _relationship_ is for human relations or states of relatedness)
relationship

,

therefore

living together before getting married could not promise a healthy and

lenghtly

relationship

.

In every

relationships

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relationship

, there is a risk that one might cheat their

partner

and become

adultorous

a person responsible for the editorial aspects of publication; the person who determines the final content of a text (especially of a newspaper or magazine)
editors

. In

this

event, a person who got cheated would not be able to file a legal complaint, because they are not legally married.

This

would only turn

premarital

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a premarital relationship

relationship

as a disadvantage for those people who was cheated by their

promiscous

not selective of a single class or person
promiscuous

other half, because there will be no legal case that might console their pain and suffering. Single mother

for instance

, who have been in a

pre marital

relating to events before a marriage
premarital

relationships

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relationship

, where several of them were

desserted

forsaken by owner or inhabitants
deserted

by their unsatisfied

partner

, and most

them

people in general
they

were not be able to file legal complaint, because of

lack

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the lack

of marriage certificate.

In conclusion, entering into a

relationship

without legal commitment would not provide assurance of revealing one_s intention due to unpredictable instances and due to some possible legal issues.

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