There is no denying the fact that
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eal problem and many it can be experienced around the world. It is affecting all
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living beings. Many believe that people are more responsible for
than organizations, and there prompt actions are necessary to rectify the current changes.
essay will analyze
statement and will shed light on my view in the conclusion.
with, our eco-system is greatly damaged due to our usage of the transportation system. Fossil fuels emitted by cars, buses etc. are one of the biggest contributors in damaging our O-zone Layer. These gasses emission causes all kinds of pollutions.
, In 2019, Delhi ranked lowest in clean air index and causing several airway diseases in the citizens.
, pollutant air quality due to heavy transportation dependency on people.
, on another side,
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uman is responsible for
they do not have a significant effect on the
as the activities of big corporations do. Manufacturing plants are the main culprit
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damaging the environment.
, many pharmaceutical companies dumped their waste in nearby rivers or fields causing harmful waste effects to marine life and
unmonitored waste management is affecting
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esponsibility lies within government and companies, as
has to come up from the top. We as people can make small changes in our daily lives like not air-conditioner around the clock or try to be more physically active and walk to nearby places rather than driving, etc. But, the main
will come in
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when governments will educate their citizens about
and take preventive measures.
, companies initiating green projects to use clean energy for production, and by hosting company social responsibility projects to save the
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companies have partnered up with WWF for their save the
project and many others.
To conclude, as I aforementioned, the bigger responsibility lies within the hands of governments and companies rather than a single person.
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