Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, students from either rich or poor family are willing to

extent

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extend

their level of education by continuing their study at any

university

in their home country or

in abroad after

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abroad after

finishing high school.

However

, some people find it hard to reach those universities

that

is completely opposed

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are completely opposed

to my opinion. In

this

essay, I am going

examine

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to examine

two reasons that students can access easily into the

university

.

First

, fully funded

scholarships

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scholarship

opportunity

are opened

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is opened

every year for students who want to continue their study abroad or in local

university

. It is

great chance

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a great chance

for students who are having financial problem could get their scholarship and study at their dream school.

Second

, as the infrastructure

are developed

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is developed

with the new building of roads where people live seems to be nearer from their

university

.

Thus

, students can reach school easily without any concerned or distance barriers.
In conclusion, student in

this

generation are more access easily to the

university

than our parent_s age as a numerous scholarship opened available and the development of infrastructure

Thus

, students from poor and rich family can access into their dream

university

easily.

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