Both governments and individuals are spending vast amount of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in sociely such as poverty and health care.

It goes without saying that many entities have put a mass

of effort to tackle

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effort to tackle

environment problem

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the environment problem
environment problems

since it is a main threat to our life nowadays.

However

, there is an argue that

instead

of focusing on how to secure flora and fauna world, people could re-consider to solve community problems.

Although

I believe that citizens life is vital for a society to thrive, in my opinion, both eco-system should receive equal consideration as they have related to each others.

In the one hand, wildlife habitats

have play

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have played

a key role to the surviving chance of every creature

in

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on

this

planet, which need serious support from organizations. Since human

are belong

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belongs

to

Earth_s food chain

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the Earth_s food chain

, every change that happened to others animals

also

affect us in various ways. In fact, our life

rely

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relies

on nature balance. Bumblebee,

for example

, would be considered to be the most important insect in North America as their main duty as pollinator. As the population of

this

creature

are now declining

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is now declining

rapidly due to the urbanization, which including deforestation process.

At

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As

a result, the governments have to spend million of dollars for alternative machinery, which is a highly cost for

such

a simple task that could be done by nature automatically.

In the other hand, the community should receive

equal amount

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an equal amount

of budget as well. Since the government

have

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has

a responsibility to protect and advance living

condition

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conditions

of its citizen, it should distribute more aid package to help low-pay or illness person to finance their accommodations. Our residents could have a proper care and contribute to the success of the economy.

In conclusion, both animal and human eco-system are

equal

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equally

vital.

Therefore

, it is true that we should find a way to maintain balance for these two

factor

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factors

to improve with better result.

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