At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large amount numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the recent days, the

youth

such

aas

to the same degree (often followed by _as_)
as

young adults are greater in population in the

world

,

however

, there is a decrease in the senior citizens in the

world

.

This

essay is an attempt to evaluate,

wheater

introduces two alternatives
whether

the merits

outweight

be heavier than
outweigh

the demerits or not.

To begin

with,

youth

plays a significantly in the development of

world

Suggestion
the world

. They are gaining knowledge in the field of education and advanced technology.

Similarly

, young adults are contributing

in

Suggestion
to

the development of the economy.

Thus

, higher the

youth

power, any country can gain wealth for the country.

For instance

, a survey conducted by the Oxford

univesity

Suggestion
Univesity
university

, has

releaved

(of pain or sorrow) made easier to bear
relieved
released

that most of the developed countries have

numberof

adults than senior adults.

On the other hand

, the experience gained by senior people over the years cannot be over-looked. Young people can learn from senior people and not to make any mistakes.

Moreover

,

youth

must follow the rules of the elder people, which motivates younger one and

also

reduce the mistakes.

For Example

, an interview conducted by well know company Infosys, thirty percent of the adult senior have been recruited for the higher benefits.

Thus

, they have been well known of the facts and factors of the corporate

world

,

hence

youth

learn from them.

To summarize, despite the fact that the elder people have their own place in the society and the corporate

world

,

youth

is the future of the

world

.

Thus by

Accept comma addition
Thus, by

looking both sides, it can be concluded that

advantages

Suggestion
the advantages

outweight

be heavier than
outweigh

drawbacks.

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