We seem to live in a new normal world in which working and studying from home nowadays are likely to be the inevitable trends as the advance of technology and high-tech devices are more and more affordable for everyone.
has some benefits and drawbacks needed to be concerned
as the issues relating to the social connection, the productivity of work or study.
, I would like to address these positive and negative influences in the
with the positive abstract, I am convinced that
development could aid to enhance our connection when working with clients in remote places.
, the more employees working online, the fewer vehicles, especially the private ones, drive on the road and
will result in causing less air pollution by dwindling less CO2 emission from their vehicles. The same ideology could be true for studying, students can study at home, which means they can contribute to protect the environment and,
, save time to travel to schools.
, there are some disadvantages to
kind of online working or studying,
could reduce the productivity of the staff due to the reduction of
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hysical connection. Especially for those occupations involving teamwork,
could cause more difficulties to each team member to communicate because they do not know exactly whether their teammates are available at home or not.
, some workers who are not too familiar with the technology would be struggling to find
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way to chat with their co-worker.
, students seem to be more familiar with
, but it turns out they could
be distracted easier by online games or social media and so forth.
, the development of technology brings some benefits for us to work and study remotely but
consists of some drawbacks appealing us to deal with.
, it is apparently up to us to decide how to take the advantages of
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