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of reporters towards celebrities is a matter of concern. In order to have name and fame, their personal
_s are put at cost. I agree with the statement that professional
must be distinguished from personal
, I will put forward discussions with my consent by discussing both
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with, actors or leaders are followed by reporters anywhere and everywhere they go. Whether it is a movie launch or a family get together their privacy is always at stake.
of which they are forced to appoint bodyguards to protect themselves. Even, star kids cannot go out in public alone as media follows them everywhere. Most of the time it happens that
of showing true picture reporters exaggerate the news in order to grab more Television Rating Point. Apart from
, fear of having a conflicting situation in the crowd in the presence of news reporters
concerns actors, as it may tarnish
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It appears that on screen is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
, some people are of the view that famous people
The verb opens does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
up their personal lives to
The noun phrase public seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
ublic in order to have sympathy and publicity.
is appropriate to some extent, as in today_s time celebs are hardly concerned with the content of what they are doing and priorities money over everything. But, one should not forget that it is the public who popularizes them
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like youth nowadays hardly likes a
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or biography based movies,
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they prefer to watch violence.
To conclude, I wholeheartedly agree that unfair treatment of media has muddled up with famous people_s
. And restrictions on them must be imposed while approaching any celebrity.
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