A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter_s 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: thank him for the invitation mention why you can not attend the birthday party offer to meet him some other day

Dear

Alies

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I hope you are doing great.

First

of all thanks for inviting me to your daughter

anita_s

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birthday party.I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have an urgent meeting

on

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in

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28December so

i

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will not able to attend

this

special day.
My dear friend

i

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was very happy after

recieved

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your letter

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about for

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for

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about

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birthday

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the birthday

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party and

i

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am very thankful to you that you still remember me and invite

to

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me to

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participate me

on

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your daughter_s day.
Unfortunately,on 28 December I have a meeting with my boss regarding my

pormotion

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This

meeting will be organized out of town so

i

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cannot attend

this

party.
I want to meet you and your family.What about the

next

weekend?Your daughter will

also

free

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on that day .so you will come with

family

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your family

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.We will enjoy

together

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ourselves together

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Hope you understand my problem and will wait for your reply soon.
yours lovingly,
Supan

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