Dear Dave,
Hope
letter
The verb find does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
you in
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
radiant health and the best of spirit. I_
writing
letter to greet you on the birth of your child. My joy knew no
It seems that bound may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
when
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
came to know about
.
I_
so glad to tell you that I bought a sleeping cart for your baby. I_
informing you at the earliest so that you don_t spend money on it. I purchased it because I want to be the
one to give you
sort of gift on
auspicious
The word occision doesn_t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word occision doesn_t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
. Fortunately, I
got a huge discount on it because of winter sales.
I_
so excited to meet you that I have already booked a flight
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that the word sunday may be a proper noun in this context. Consider capitalizing the word.
. Could you please send someone to pick me up from the airport
Consider using a question mark to signify that this sentence is a question.
I know there will be too
It appears that the quantifier much does not fit with the countable noun guests. Consider changing the quantifier or the noun.
guests in your house so
The pronoun I should always be capitalized.
have booked a hotel near your house to avoid any trouble for you.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours lovingly,
Farrukh
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